Our rough drafts for class were due on Thursday. We got into groups and read each other rough drafts, corrected them, and gave the people in our group’s advice about what they could do to improve their paper. I think that my paper is on the right track so far; I know that I can always add more to improve it. I think that I prove my might in many different ways, with my sources, sites, and examples I talk about from the movie. A lot of problems that kept reoccurring in my group were using a lot of the same words. The thesis or the topic was always mentioned a lot. Also the most common way people sited their sources would be to put the name of the article and where it was found first then talk about it. That is still considered siting the site.